HALO

I bought a halo and it was my 1^st  halo toy. I was happy.  I bought it to school to play with.

This is a description of my halo toy. Inside it’s brown and black armour is a toy man. It has extra gear and he has got a helmet and 3 guns. He has his own little base with 4 handles on the sides. There are pegs to hold the armour.

The best stag

My goal is to get better at writing my ideas clearly and adding details.
When you read my writing you can help me by telling me what I have written clearly and got better at.


On the drive home we saw a big stag. It had big horns, twenty pointers! We almost crashed into it . I felt scared too. Everyone felt scared!