My goal is to get better at writing my ideas clearly and adding details.
When you read my writing you can help me by telling me what I have written clearly and got better at.
On the drive home we saw a big stag. It had big horns, twenty pointers! We almost crashed into it . I felt scared too. Everyone felt scared!
I like the way you told us that the stag was a 20 pointer!!
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